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1985: Lament of The Great Sea [Chapter 5]

The M/S Valka had become a living nightmare. The ghostly presence that haunted the ship had driven the crew to the brink of madness. Gripped by terror, they were volatile, ready to snap at any moment. The oppressive atmosphere reached its peak as the ghost's power grew more tangible and terrifying.


Tensions had been rising for days. Yuri and Pavel, both exhausted and jumpy from the ongoing disturbances, started arguing over the ship's machinery. Their voices quickly rose, echoing through the metal corridors.


"You're trying to sabotage us!" Yuri yelled, his face flushed with anger.


Pavel shot back, "No, you're the one losing it!" He threw a punch, sending Yuri staggering into a wall.

Other crew members rushed to break them apart, but the scene devolved into chaos. Fear and suspicion had been brewing among the men, and now it boiled over. Fists flew, and blood splattered across the engine room as the fight turned savage.


In the confusion, Dimitri grabbed a wrench and swung wildly, hitting a crew member's head. The man collapsed, blood pooling on the floor. The room's temperature seemed to drop even further, the air thick with an unnatural chill.


Ivan was suddenly shoved against the wall by an unseen force. Before him stood the woman from the photograph, her eyes filled with an intense rage. "You must suffer as I did," she said, her voice cold and sharp.


Her hand, icy and firm, wrapped around his throat. Ivan struggled to breathe, his vision dimming. Flashes of her past—betrayal, a fall into dark waters—flooded his mind. With a desperate burst of strength, he tore free from her grip, collapsing to the floor. The room's chill remained, leaving him shaking and haunted by what he had seen.


The apparition appeared, more tangible than ever before. The woman in the wedding dress stood before him, her eyes filled with sorrow and fury. This time, she did not vanish when he approached. Instead, she reached out, her ghostly hand almost brushing his cheek.


Ivan's voice was raw with desperation as he faced the ghostly figure. "Why are you doing this? What do you want from us?"


The apparition's eyes bore into him, and Ivan felt a chill run down his spine. "Please," he whispered, his voice cracking. "We didn't hurt you. Just tell us how to make this stop."


The ghost's face twisted in sorrow and rage, her silent gaze offering no answers, only the relentless weight of her grief and fury.


The apparition's face twisted in anguish, and Ivan felt a sudden, intense cold seeping into his bones. The room around him darkened, and he could see the other crew members frozen in place, their eyes wide with terror as the ghostly figure moved among them.


The Apparition's Wrath

The ghost began to physically interact with the crew, her presence almost solid. She moved through the men, her touch freezing and painful. She pushed one sailor into a wall with a strength that belied her ethereal form, leaving him gasping for breath. Another was sent sprawling across the floor, his skin turning blue where she had touched him.


Ivan watched in horror as the ghost wreaked havoc, her sorrow and rage manifesting in violent outbursts. She clawed at the men, her nails leaving deep, icy gashes. Blood pooled on the floors, mixing with the frost that coated every surface. The ship's lights flickered wildly, casting the scene in a ghastly strobe.


One by one, the crew fell. Pavel's body was found crumpled in the galley, his eyes wide open in a final, silent scream. Yuri was discovered in the cargo hold, his throat slit by an unseen blade. The once lively ship quickly turned into a floating mausoleum, its halls echoing with the cries of the damned.


Summoning every ounce of courage, Ivan stepped forward, placing himself between the apparition and his remaining crewmates. "Leave us alone!" he shouted. "We didn't do anything to you!"


The ghost paused, her hollow eyes locking onto his. For a moment, the air was thick with silence, the only sound the distant, mournful wail of the wind. Then, slowly, the ghostly figure began to fade, her sorrowful eyes lingering on Ivan as she vanished into the shadows.


Petrovic’s Escape

After the climactic confrontation, the tension aboard the Valka was palpable. Ivan Petrovic, battered and traumatized, huddled alone as the night wore on, waiting for any sign of relief. The ship's corridors were silent, the oppressive presence of the ghost receding but not entirely gone.


As the first light of dawn began to creep over the horizon, the atmosphere aboard the Valka shifted. The whispers faded to a distant murmur, the cold spots dissipated, and the shadows retreated to their corners. The ghost's power, which had been at its peak during the night, seemed to weaken with the coming of daylight.


Ivan Petrovic, exhausted but alert, sensed this change. He knew this might be his only chance to escape the haunted vessel. Determined to survive, he made his way to the captain's cabin. The door hung ajar, and inside, the room was in disarray from the earlier disturbances. Ivan moved quickly, searching for the ship's cash reserve that he knew was kept there.


He found the strongbox hidden behind a false panel. With trembling hands, he opened it and stared at the stacks of money inside. His mind raced. The ghost’s wrath had been terrifying, but now, with its power waning, he had a chance to escape not only with his life but also with a small fortune.


Stuffing as much of the cash as he could into a duffel bag, Ivan moved silently through the ship. The other crew members lay dead, their bodies cold and lifeless. He felt a pang of guilt leaving them behind, but survival instincts overrode his conscience.


Escape to the Sea

On deck, the dawn light started to break over the horizon, a welcome relief from the night's terror. Ivan worked quickly and quietly, lowering a life raft into the water. He took one last look around, then climbed down, the duffel bag heavy on his shoulder.


As he paddled away from the Valka, he looked back. The ship stood ominously on the water, dark and silent. The oppressive feeling had lifted with the daylight, but the memories of the past days lingered. The sea was calm now, the only sounds the gentle waves and distant seabirds.


Hours passed, and the Valka grew smaller on the horizon until it was just a speck. Exhausted, Ivan allowed himself to relax for the first time in days. He had escaped, but the experience had left him scarred in ways he could not yet comprehend. The duffel bag of money sat heavy at his feet, a reminder of the desperate decision he had made.


A passing trawler eventually found Ivan, adrift and weary. He was taken aboard, and his story, fragmented and tinged with the madness he had endured, was met with a mix of disbelief and pity. He clung to the duffel bag, the money inside a testament to his survival, even if it came with a price.


As dawn fully broke over the Great Sea, the M/S Valka was left adrift, its haunting mysteries locked within its darkened halls. Ivan Petrovic, the sole survivor, carried with him the memories of a ghostly presence, a woman's sorrow and rage that had nearly claimed his life.


His escape marked the end of the nightmare on the Valka, but the story of the haunted ship would live on, whispered among sailors and chronicled in the annals of maritime lore. The ghost's power had waned with the dawn, but her sorrowful song and the shadows of her presence would forever linger in the minds of those who dared to venture into the haunted waters off the coast of Maraheim.





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